If we took a poll from
people in today’s world about whether you have “free will” and are able to
control your life, the majority of the population would probably agree that
they do. That they are able to decide how their life ends up and that they have
the ability to make any decision they want too. They would fall under
libertarianism. This view states that although external forces have an effect
on our actions other decisions come from spontaneous free will. Spontaneous
free will is the idea that we can control the things we do in our lives and
decide the course of our life. This theory connects well with the ideas of having
self-control and maintaining you “free will” to do what you want but I believe
that it lacks ideas that hard determinism doesn’t.
Determinism is the
theory that in today’s world there is no free will because our actions were all
pre planned from earlier events or ideas. In this theory it also has two other
ideas that explain it a little more. The first is, Hard Determinism, which states
that free will doesn’t exist and neither does moral responsibility. It’s
believed that all of our actions were a result of external forces i.e. the way
that we were raised by our parents or the type of environment that we grew up
in. The second is Soft Determinism, which states that our actions are still
caused by external forces but we could have free will because of morality. We
can make our own decisions but all our actions are determined in advance.
In my opinion, I believe
that hard determinism is more plausible then libertinism in the cause of human actions.
In our life today so many things happen without understanding the cause or
knowing why we did what we did. We try to justify our actions by stating that “you
were taught” or “I experienced this in my life” that made me do what I did. We
make all or our actions and ideas from experience even if we think that we came
up with them on our own, we wouldn’t know what it was caused by if we hand already
had it planned out for us beforehand. Take the idea of wanting to become a
famous singer. You believe that it was a spontaneous act of free will on your
part to choose this career but in actuality you were taught and pushed into
that kind of lifestyle. That whatever you grew up around or were taught by your
parents about being famous is what led you to that decision. That whatever even
occurred in your life was made by past experiences. I would then also argue
that because we lack free will we aren’t morally responsible for the consequences
of our actions. That we had no choice in what was occurring therefore we could
not be responsible for the actions that we displayed. An example is a man
fighting in war. Because they are called in do something that can be considered
just but not morally right, we can decide that they had no choice in the event.
That whatever events that occurred in their lives doesn’t play a role in them
having the free will to kill, but rather they couldn’t pick and choose what
ideas they received and had within them.
Explanatory
Breadth- While both ideas seem to explain the types of
human behavior, determinism says that “all” actions are caused by earlier
events in our lives while libertarianism is stuck behind “some” actions. Determinism
doesn’t fail to cover all aspects while libertarianism does.
Explanatory Depth-
Determinism can tell you specifically where the cause of each action came from
while libertarianism cannot. Simply explaining that spontaneous free will is
the ability to control our actions doesn’t mean much when you can’t explain
where it’s coming from. The act to choose one idea from the next without a
plausible reason for doing so is where the argument for libertarianism fails.
Simplicity- As I had
stated before Determinism states that all actions come from external forces
while libertarianism states that some come from external forces while other actions
come from our ability to choose. Not having a strong argument that covers all aspects
of human actions is the reason why determinism has more of an advantage against
libertarianism in simplicity.
Conservatism- I believe
that in today’s world most people would believe that they have a choose and are
able to decide their fate which is why libertarianism would connect more with
today’s society. I think the ideas of both of them would have an even outcome
on what people believe but I’m not as confident that many people would want to
believe that their life is basically predetermined and would agree with
determinism.
1. Libertarianism and
Hard Determinism are the most plausible explanations of human action.
2. Hard Determinism has
much more explanatory depth and simplicity, while Libertarianism has an small
advantage in conservatism.
3. Therefore, Hard
Determinism is the most likely explanation of human actions.
Your arguments are very good but i think you should add a little more explanation to each one. For example for your Explanatory Breadth argument your not really giving examples of each one. your just restating what each means
ReplyDeleteStrong introduction, and definitions for Libertarianism and Hard Determinism. I think you should've added more explanation to the last 4 definitions so that you're claim had more support. Overall, i think you had a strong argument as to why you thought determinism was more plausible.
ReplyDeleteEmma,
ReplyDeleteThis i a bold piece of writing, and you defend your claims quite well. I do, however, think it is important for you further you discussion of the absence of choice in our lives. Libertarians argue that only some of our actions are decisions are a product of free will. They also redefine the meaning of free will or "spontaneous" decisions. It would serve your writing well to define terms such as this and deconstruct them in your argument. Beyond that, I felt that your analysis of the pieces of the hard-determinism argument was fair and thorough. However, you could have added more to your thoughts on the simplicity of the arguments. For example, there are less pieces to the determinism argument, but the imagine the complexities of discovering the origin of a specific decision. Excellent piece of writing, very persuasive.
Will